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Beau Messer [ Guest ]
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Grammar help
« on: February 26, 2015, 08:04:56 AM »
I'm writing BJ's general appearance and I ran into a barrier trying to word something. You guys all write so well, so I figure someone problems knows which is correct.

So I'm writing about his body build:

"His build is most closely compared to that of a runner, though one could dispute that based on his broad shoulders and solid overall build."

The part that's underlined; should that stay as is, or should it be "overall solid build"?

Dermod Larkin Morfessa [ Death Eater ]
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Re: Grammar help
« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2015, 08:11:37 AM »
Personally I'd use the latter, but don't get hung up on minor things like that. We're more concerned with a character who's playable than the fine nuances of writing style. So long as you've spellchecked and not got a heap of random capitalization or incomplete sentences it'll be fine ;)

~ Carys

Beau Messer [ Guest ]
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Re: Grammar help
« Reply #2 on: February 26, 2015, 08:18:41 AM »
I'll try not to :P Thank you!

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